the hair looks really great!!! > w < but it kinda looks lazy so you should probably add more lines and more color to it. XD but i still love the coloring on the hair its looks very good compared to most shadings. X3 i also think the shading for the socks should be a lil lighter it looks to dark which isn't that natural. and the left side of the head shape should be a lil skinnier and less pointy. other than that it's amazing!!!! i just know you'll be a great artist/mangaka! sorry if i sound mean allie, i don't mean to offend you or anything. you are a great artist! so dont worry about these simple mistakes.